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Written assessment: who is guilty?

Prompt (120 words): Who is the most guilty in Macbeth? Give two reasons and one line from the play.

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  • In my opinion, the most guilty is...
  • First,...
  • Second,...
  • For example, ...says: "..."
  • To conclude,...
CriteriaLevel 1Level 2Level 3Level 4
Answer to the promptOff topicPartialClearClear and nuanced
Evidence from the playNoneGeneralPrecise examplesQuotations analysed
OrganisationNo planBasicParagraphs and connectorsFluent and logical
LanguageMany errorsSome errorsFew errorsAccurate and varied
Model answer

In my opinion, the most guilty is Macbeth. First, the witches only tell him he will be king; they never tell him to kill. Second, he kills Duncan and then Banquo, alone, without his wife's help. He even says that his only reason is "vaulting ambition". Lady Macbeth helps him at the beginning, but at the end she is destroyed by guilt. To conclude, Macbeth chooses his crimes.

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